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Closed Season Blues came into being in November 2018. I wrote it after my first season at Alton Towers, full of emotion over Scarefest and Fireworks. In it, I’d tried something different. Instead of briefly referencing the flashback in verse two and then moving back to the present, I kept the memory going into the third verse. The result, in my eyes, was beautiful. The Prose Over the last two weeks, I’ve spent my time reworking the original poem. I knew that the rhythm – or meter, as it’s referred to in poetry – was off. The line length often varied a clumsy amount and the rhyming was inconsistent. I sat down with my project book and got to work. As you can see, I marked out the stressed and unstressed syllables that make the meter with full circles and empty circles, respectively. This is how Stephen Fry does it…

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When I look through these picturesI hear an echo from the pagesAnd if I should close my eyesI feel it firing up inside I’m in the station by the trainsStretching the span of time that remainsBut then I blink and I’m back at homeRemembering it was a while ago But still it plays in my headThe words we said and what we didAnd when I turned to say goodbyeTaking it in, freeing a sigh Now in an album they will be foundA record of colour, a hint of soundThey serve to remind me of the great timesOf the awesome people, the amazing rides I look at them when I feel lowTo get a glimpse of what I’ve come to knowBut it’s a while ’til I feel that powerThe happiness of Alton Towers I miss you Alton, I really doI just can’t wait to get back to youYou mean so much,…

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